Past Duties, (ST:TNG, P/Q)
Working on a Picard/Q vid, and as I've been going through the mammoth quantities of source, this decided to come out. Thanks to
cesperanza for beta!
Past Duties, (ST:TNG, P/Q)
Past Duties, (ST:TNG, P/Q)
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LOVED this.
Thanks for posting it.
I'm completely enchanted. What a delightful story. *Thank you* -- I needed that today.
The voices are exactly right, and the bit about somebody else's kids playing in the vineyard is heartbreaking. Excellent work.
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This KILLED me so completely. Fantastic. And that last line! So so good.
Q!!!!!!!
I may now die in peace.
(I will admit to thinking up a wonderful ending very much like this for Ivanava (sp?) featuring Marcus appearing to her at the end of her days ... it's brilliant to read something so similar for Picard. /grin. Excellent!)
Tonight was my first time reading this story, so I just had to let you know that it made me smile.
"The chores are done, Jean-Luc," Q said. "The work is finished. Come outside and play."
...definitely my favorite line.
*happy sigh*
I also am greatly impressed by the way you worked with mood, and the transitions between the initial melancholy to confusion on Picard's part, to the joy and incredible potential you left us with. I think I'm going to spend the next day or two imagining past the end of the story; you've given me a wonderful space to live in for the next while.
tl;dr I loved this. You are very, very good.
Beautiful!