Cook RPF: Proximity (Cook/Archie)
Sigh, yes. It's slash. *buys ticket to yet another special hell* I started writing this as a prompt in
monkiedude's comments over here this morning, and abruptly it turned on me and was a story. Dammit!
Proximity (2500 words)
Cook/Archuleta
Cook usually made his bodyguards stay back—probably, Archie thought a little meanly, because they cramped his style of letting everyone grope him.
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With many many thanks to
giddygeek and
cesperanza for super-quick beta!
Proximity (2500 words)
Cook/Archuleta
Cook usually made his bodyguards stay back—probably, Archie thought a little meanly, because they cramped his style of letting everyone grope him.
Read the story!
With many many thanks to
haha, I know, oh, god. *covers face*
Okay, now that I can speak in complete sentences again, I LOVE IT.
- I can totally imagine Archie being this oblivious, and I love his internal monologue, a little rambly and flaily and trying so hard to be nice. *smishes him*
-I also totally love your Cook SO MUCH. He's so exuberant and happy and slutty (of which I totally approve!). eee!
Cook had been really nice, and he was always trying to, like, make everything fun, even when stuff was crazy and they were all tired.
I like this image. It totally makes me think of La Vita e Bella and Cook as Roberto Benigni. It fits, don't you think?
That is all. That and the David Cook-is-a-slut moment between the two of them was awesome, and how they came together was awesome, and Cook showing Archie how to play guitar was doubly awesome. What can we do to get you to write more Cook/Archuleta, hmm? ;)
ha. haha. hahaha. *looks at 16,000-word story and 10,000-word story, nowhere near end*
um, I think all that is necessary is to hang around a while? *covers face*
Story filled with awesomeness!
I love it! oh so many things about this were just <33333. ugh. your Archie voice is fantastic and I think "Um, you kind of are," may be my favorite line because I could hear it in Archie's perfectly serious 'why is this funny' voice and oh. <3
also, I really like when Cook calls him 'Dave'. like I don't know there's something more intimate about it or something. but yes. this whole thing. yes. :)
why is your archie SO ADORABLE. i want to pinch his cheek forever. ): ): and also, he REALLY sounds like a doofy teenager, it's a bit scary how good you are at that. >___> slutty!cook is awesome beyond words. i want him to be my best friend, or something.
;___; please have more fic of them making out soon?
That hope has just died.
This is entirely adorable and I loved it and I want lots more like it and I think I'm going to go shoot myself now.
This is sort of the lovely flip side to that, where they are very connected the whole time, and Archie doesn't even realize, until he does. This was adorable and funny and sweet, and basically any Cookleta I've imagined, had that guitar scene in it, so thanks so much for enhancing the image.
Cook
being a slutsharing the love, of which he has a lot, is awesome! Especially when seen through Archie's (so, so, oblivious) eyes, because! Hilarity.He was having trouble breathing, and he had that same awful squirmy shivery feeling again, and Cook's hands were on his skin now, all over, sliding his t-shirt up over his head. The feeling just got worse and worse, and worse, and oh, god, he never wanted it to stop.
*happy sigh* So wonderful :)
lol
so many lines made me laugh and/or nod at my monitor...
this kind of switch would flip where you weren't so much allowed in his personal space—anyone and everyone was allowed in his personal space—as you became part of his personal space.
He could sing, that was what he wanted to do, not give weird interviews that were the same ten questions over and over, especially when three of the ten were creepy questions about his dad, which, Archie really just wanted to punch whoever was asking. [me too, archie. me too.]
Archie liked that part a lot, Cook was really good at writing lyrics, and it was cool to watch his lines go through like ten versions, one word at a time changing, and see how that changed the rhythm and feel of the song.
Archie, who literally fell down backwards trying to shut his eyes and close the door and get away and apologize all at the same time. [LMAO. poor kid.]
Cook said, "I swear I'm not a complete slut," and Archie said, "Um, you kind of are," and Cook looked at him indignantly, and then he said, "Oh, god, I kind of am," and covered his face.
Cook was still kissing him, but also saying softly, "Shh, I've got you," and Archie heard himself saying, "Please." So, um, apparently this was the idea, and he just hadn't realized it before. [!!!!]
really... awesome job.
'scuse me, I think I need to go read this again and again and again. so so good. :D
YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY DID I ALSO MENTION YAY!
/flails
The Archie voice is just terrific, wow. WOW. He's too darling. And the GUITARS because they're both LEFTIES and AWWW. Archie could power small nations with his puppy-angst and overthinkingness. ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥
*sighs, has her ticket punched*
I think my favorite part was Archie walking in on Cook. HEE.
lickingliking it. And I cannot even believe I wrote 'licking' there first. *head in hands*It's not like I really thought I had standards.
(loves adorable slutty DC)
I wonder what the next frontier is. Slashers slashing slashers?
Cute story. :)
I love how this starts with all these adorable tour pictures which came up recently.
And, again,
ps: Slutty!Cook is so hot, so very, very hot.