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Cook RPF: Proximity (Cook/Archie)

Sigh, yes. It's slash. *buys ticket to yet another special hell* I started writing this as a prompt in [info]monkiedude's comments over here this morning, and abruptly it turned on me and was a story. Dammit!

Proximity (2500 words)
Cook/Archuleta

Cook usually made his bodyguards stay back—probably, Archie thought a little meanly, because they cramped his style of letting everyone grope him.

Read the story!

With many many thanks to [info]giddygeek and [info]cesperanza for super-quick beta!

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That was um, really sweet and lovely and hot. And uh wow, hello another special hell indeed.
And uh wow, hello another special hell indeed.

haha, I know, oh, god. *covers face*
AHAHAHAHA. YES. AWESOME.

Okay, now that I can speak in complete sentences again, I LOVE IT.
- I can totally imagine Archie being this oblivious, and I love his internal monologue, a little rambly and flaily and trying so hard to be nice. *smishes him*

-I also totally love your Cook SO MUCH. He's so exuberant and happy and slutty (of which I totally approve!). eee!

Cook had been really nice, and he was always trying to, like, make everything fun, even when stuff was crazy and they were all tired.
I like this image. It totally makes me think of La Vita e Bella and Cook as Roberto Benigni. It fits, don't you think?
awwww, yay! and I, uh, kind of totally love slutty Cook.
I love you so freaking much.

That is all. That and the David Cook-is-a-slut moment between the two of them was awesome, and how they came together was awesome, and Cook showing Archie how to play guitar was doubly awesome. What can we do to get you to write more Cook/Archuleta, hmm? ;)
What can we do to get you to write more Cook/Archuleta, hmm? ;)

ha. haha. hahaha. *looks at 16,000-word story and 10,000-word story, nowhere near end*

um, I think all that is necessary is to hang around a while? *covers face*
I should've held a pool on how long it'd take for you to step firmly over the line. *cheeky grin* I think even Poland knew it was coming down the pike though.

Story filled with awesomeness!
yeah, uh, only Neville Chamberlain was under any illusions! sigh. *g*
\o/

I love it! oh so many things about this were just <33333. ugh. your Archie voice is fantastic and I think "Um, you kind of are," may be my favorite line because I could hear it in Archie's perfectly serious 'why is this funny' voice and oh. <3

also, I really like when Cook calls him 'Dave'. like I don't know there's something more intimate about it or something. but yes. this whole thing. yes. :)
*beams!* and yes, I um, might have watched that first-impressions video a whole bunch of times, heeee. *smishes Archie* \o/
good lord, i love this. i love, love, love it and i'm totally shameless with my adoration for all things cook/archuleta. and every so often, there's a fic with them that's believable and real and -- were you the same one, oh my god forgive me if i'm being a rude asshole right now, who wrote the gen fic with the plane and the crash and the GLORIOUSNESS? anyway. sigh, this is amazing. i want more of it. write cook/archuleta all freaking day, please. ♥
aw, heeee! yes, that was my OTHER ridiculous giant story, oh dear. *grins* and yay, thank you. :D
ohmygod, i'm going to the special hell too, and i like it.

why is your archie SO ADORABLE. i want to pinch his cheek forever. ): ): and also, he REALLY sounds like a doofy teenager, it's a bit scary how good you are at that. >___> slutty!cook is awesome beyond words. i want him to be my best friend, or something.

;___; please have more fic of them making out soon?
Heeee! Yay, that is totally my reaction to real archie & cook :D
AWWWWWW. so cute! so wonderful! i don't care about these people at all, but i'll never get tired of the way you write. mad love.
yay, oh, thank you! :)
Funny, but I never realized that all this time, I'd still retained an inner conviction that ultimately I'd dodge the Special Hell.

That hope has just died.

This is entirely adorable and I loved it and I want lots more like it and I think I'm going to go shoot myself now.
oh dear. um. sorry? *drags everyone into special hell with me for company* :D
Oh yay! I loved Fortunate Son(which, sorry, hadn't gotten back to leave feedback)and I generally don't do gen, and even then I was totally like -five years from now, they are so going to be a couple-so basically, in my head, there's like fanfic of your fanfic *g*. I loved the connection formed through the crash that probably never would have existed otherwise.

This is sort of the lovely flip side to that, where they are very connected the whole time, and Archie doesn't even realize, until he does. This was adorable and funny and sweet, and basically any Cookleta I've imagined, had that guitar scene in it, so thanks so much for enhancing the image.
I didn't think it was possible, but my love for Cook and Archie just went up by, like, a billion exponential points due to this story ♥

Cook being a slut sharing the love, of which he has a lot, is awesome! Especially when seen through Archie's (so, so, oblivious) eyes, because! Hilarity.

He was having trouble breathing, and he had that same awful squirmy shivery feeling again, and Cook's hands were on his skin now, all over, sliding his t-shirt up over his head. The feeling just got worse and worse, and worse, and oh, god, he never wanted it to stop.

*happy sigh* So wonderful :)

lol

That was awesome! you have truly sent me down the path to the dark side now.
wow, that was awesome. i'm not even all that into the cookleta thing, but you so beautifully nailed archie's internal monologue... as i was reading it, it was like i could hear him saying every word. and, man, cook really is so touchy with people and archie is so not. makes for an odd pair.

so many lines made me laugh and/or nod at my monitor...
this kind of switch would flip where you weren't so much allowed in his personal space—anyone and everyone was allowed in his personal space—as you became part of his personal space.

He could sing, that was what he wanted to do, not give weird interviews that were the same ten questions over and over, especially when three of the ten were creepy questions about his dad, which, Archie really just wanted to punch whoever was asking. [me too, archie. me too.]

Archie liked that part a lot, Cook was really good at writing lyrics, and it was cool to watch his lines go through like ten versions, one word at a time changing, and see how that changed the rhythm and feel of the song.

Archie, who literally fell down backwards trying to shut his eyes and close the door and get away and apologize all at the same time. [LMAO. poor kid.]

Cook said, "I swear I'm not a complete slut," and Archie said, "Um, you kind of are," and Cook looked at him indignantly, and then he said, "Oh, god, I kind of am," and covered his face.

Cook was still kissing him, but also saying softly, "Shh, I've got you," and Archie heard himself saying, "Please." So, um, apparently this was the idea, and he just hadn't realized it before. [!!!!]

really... awesome job.
welcome to the dark side!


'scuse me, I think I need to go read this again and again and again. so so good. :D
*flails* I'm thinking I should feel slightly uncomfortable about loving this so much, but I really, really don't. This is just all kinds of yay. Fantastic Archie voice. Sometimes I just find him too precious for words. And I could totally picture Cook like this. The guy's an absolute rock star.
OMFFFG YAY!

YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY DID I ALSO MENTION YAY!

/flails
Oh my GOODNESS. Perfection, just. AHAHAHAHAH! If I ask for prompts, like, every week, will I get one of these out of it each time? :)

The Archie voice is just terrific, wow. WOW. He's too darling. And the GUITARS because they're both LEFTIES and AWWW. Archie could power small nations with his puppy-angst and overthinkingness. ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥
I haven't read this yet, but I will...and I thank you in advance for writing it. :)
*dies* Seriously. Kills me. I love this pairing. Feel free to write more any day that it strikes you because I love it. I feel so giddy inside that I might float away!
Why, why, why must you bring me along with you on the train ride to the special hell?

*sighs, has her ticket punched*

I think my favorite part was Archie walking in on Cook. HEE.
Oh, wheeee, that is a totally adorable Archie voice, and I cannot even believe I am reading American Idol RPS and licking liking it. And I cannot even believe I wrote 'licking' there first. *head in hands*
Oh, fine. Just go ahead and corrupt me some more.
It's not like I really thought I had standards.

(loves adorable slutty DC)
*buys ticket to yet another special hell*

I wonder what the next frontier is. Slashers slashing slashers?

Cute story. :)
How is it that you made me like Cookleta? Again?

I love how this starts with all these adorable tour pictures which came up recently.

And, again, [info]rhiannonhero sent me here.
come and join us, dearest! :D
First, I squealed when I saw this! Squealed. Loudly. And y'know what? It was totally the right call 'cause this rocked. I am so happy to welcome you to the dark side. Please pull up a chair and class up the place for us. We've been waiting :)

ps: Slutty!Cook is so hot, so very, very hot.
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