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the fact that you are writing entourage slash just made my night :).

The whole story was awesomely hot, but man are those voices dead on.

Sweet Jesus, the pairings you make me love!!!! I can not believe how good this was.

Good God -- that was like some director's cut episode they hide on the DVDs or something -- so amazing and so in character. The bit about Eric pushing that curl of hair out of Vince's eye? Killed me dead. And hey -- now that I am here, I need to go read my favorite story "Sunday Driving" with mama and the cannolis.

Loved this, even though I have never ever seen Entourage (I kinda want to now :D) I like the byplay between the characters, and also how pretty Vince is.

This, this is like perfect wish fulfillment! Entourage boys, getting it right and meaning it, for once! Okay, I'll be in my bunk.

omiGOD -- you and this fandom together is some seriously awesome shit: in other words, yay! for new fandom, YAY! I'm bloomingly happy because of my conviction that Entourage is the slashiest thing on television today is being validated with stories like yours, with lines like this:

"Fuck, oh fuck, shut up, Jesus," Eric said; he thought he was going to come just thinking about it, just from Vince being so crazy for it, the way Vince was practically fighting off his own orgasm, clenching into the sheets—"For Christ's sake, you stupid fuck," Eric said then, figuring it out, "this isn't a one time only offer."

oh, you got how Eric knows Vince, and gets the thing that's been building between them, and chooses to go forward even though his every rational instinct is telling him it's going to blow up in their faces, probably publically, but unable to deny the natural progression. You also got that Vince is always going to be the insecure one; beautiful and loose-limbed and relying on Eric to be the smart one (half-suspecting he'll always be denies this). For something so short, it's hot and them and perfect. Thank you!

No time to read before work, but YAYAYAYAYAY at you writing Entourage!!!

OMG how endlessly awesome!

This is one of the best a.m. pressies ever - you writing Entourage fic. Because, yeah, that show just screams slashy boys.

You've totally captured their personalities. Thanks for so much pretty!

"You know, if you and your ego need a private moment together, I could leave," Eric said, and tipped them over onto their sides so he wasn't getting squashed anymore.

I just laughed and laughed. The perfect details from the super-sized speakers to Chamillionaire to the gold-foil and purple skies. Oh, this was absolutely brilliant, and I'm so thrilled to see you writing Entourage fic. Hurrah!

gorgeous fic - I am just about to go and read it for the second time. I can see this becoming an all time re-read favorite. Just beautiful.

So imagine my delight when I discovered today that by whatever magical trick, my company's firewall has not blocked your fic site. Then multiply that by, like, 25 when I saw you had written Entourage! Then multiply THAT by, let's say 42 when I read the story and loved it!

I can't decide which I am more: amused that you're writing Entourage slash now, or impressed that you made this pairing so convincing and so hot. (Not that I'm surprised that you could do that, but I like the show and I've read some Entourage slash before and it's just never worked for me. Until now.)

You've totally nailed the voices; I loved Eric musing on how the story would hit TMZ and then take off from there, and deciding to go ahead anyway. And Vince's last line. So good!

oh, *yeah*. mmmm.

And Ari? Pah. Worry about Shawna, boys. Shawna's meaner. Also, Lloyd will just be squeeing far too much.

And here I thought that the other story was good. This was fucking fantastic: desperate Vince, and blissed-out Eric. *glee* x infinity

this is wonderful -- i love the show and LOVE that you're writing them -- yay!!

This is brilliant and hot and perfect Vince and Eric voices. It felt like a scene that could've been in the show, y'know, if Vince/Eric were canon(er).

I need a cigarette.


I don't smoke but I definately need a cigarette.

I don't generally go in for story type porn, more of a video kinda guy, but this, this is definately the exception that proves the rule.

I'm 27, have never done E in my life, not for lack of opportunity just don't see a good reason to. All I can say is it's a good thing I didn't read this story BEFORE making that decision, cause damn if thats what happens on E ( and its not even about the hotness of the participants, although we all know they are both plenty hot) then baby I might just want to sign up.

just wanted to add that, OF COURSE Vince is like the pushiest bottom in existence, and of course he makes it so hot. Once again you totally nailed the voices in this story.

God, I just love this.

I especially like:

"So are we doing this or what?"

If he called it off, if they went downstairs now, Vince would probably end up banging a girl on the couch in the living room; TMZ would still have the story by tomorrow morning, but it wouldn't have legs, not like it would if half the party said they'd pulled a disappearing act before fucking midnight. Worst-case scenario, somebody would catch Vince at the right minute, he'd pull his fuck-the-press attitude and refuse to deny it. The offers would dry up and the paparazzi would be parked outside for months, following them around, and they'd need security guards to keep them away from the windows.

"Yeah," Eric said. "Yeah, we're doing this,"

That was just so goddamn fantastic. I have not the words. The way the reasons why not to are laid out (and so very compelling, I mean, really. They are pretty good reasons why not to) and thought through and rational and the way the reasons to go ahead with it are completely unspoken, and yet, it's no contest and E doesn't waver at all. Ahhhh, I love it.

See, and if you'd had another paragraph where E thinks about all the reasons why them doing it *is* a good idea despite all the paparazzi and dried-up offers it would either not ring true or be so saccharine and I would be icked and have to look away. But, see, not saying it, but really, saying it anyway...

I like my declarations of feelings to be oblique and easily misinterpreted. God. So very much. So this was a very satisfying section for me. And I felt the need to tell you that in great detail.

"I want—I want you to," Vince said, panting, breaking up, "Eric, I want—"

"Fuck, oh fuck, shut up, Jesus," Eric said; he thought he was going to come just thinking about it, just from Vince being so crazy for it, the way Vince was practically fighting off his own orgasm, clenching into the sheets—"For Christ's sake, you stupid fuck," Eric said then, figuring it out, "this isn't a one time only offer."

In conclusion: HEART.

Wow. Amazing voices, it all felt really real to the show. And the ending -- that Ari's going to kill Eric -- was perfect. Also, this:

"For Christ's sake, you stupid fuck," Eric said then, figuring it out, "this isn't a one time only offer."

Excellent. It made me melt and laugh at the same time.

holy sweet crap. You write nothing but awesomeness.

loved this! so hot and nice and sweet, and i can't get enough of eric/vince slash at the moment! thanks :)

I am pretty much in love with this piece, particularly lines like this: "For Christ's sake, you stupid fuck," Eric said then, figuring it out, "this isn't a one time only offer."

Love your E, because he's so very E. Awesome story.

This was brilliant. You got both Eric and Vince's voices down, and their motivations. Loved it so so much.

This was my favourite bit though:-

"You are so stoned," Eric said peacefully. He had one leg pulled up and his hands laced over his stomach. Vince hadn't had a haircut in almost six weeks, blowing it off as long as he could because Shauna wouldn't try to book him for photo ops until after, and that big fluffy curl that his stylist would never cut back far enough was grown out and hanging over his eyes. Eric reached up to push it back.

"So are you," Vince said, and ducked his head into Eric's hand.

"Yeah," Eric agreed, stroking the curl back. It kept falling back down, but he didn't mind, it felt so great to just run his fingers through Vince's hair, and after a little while Vince pillowed his head on Eric's chest to let him keep doing it, which probably was kind of weird, but Eric just couldn't seem to care; he kept petting him.

The imagery this creates is just so oh boys

Love this so much.